Sunday, January 10, 2010

Day 20

So here is where it's revealed the Boss, Korchin, is torturing his Assistant, Newsom, with a doll.

It cross-cuts to this scene. I'm not sure if I'm gonna have the wastebasket smack Newsom in the face. The gag is already too broad as it is...maybe I'll think of something different. After this point in the story, Newsom decides he has had enough and packs his things. So perhaps I'll think of something more...humiliating that gets the audience to empathize, "Fuck yeah I'd quit if that shit happened to me!" (though it actually doesn't take a lot these days to quit an abusive job)

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